Draft Script 1

Draft Script 1:

PARTY SCENE:

{Close up of drink bottles, drugs, and mess from party General}

General: People chatting music and laughter.

{Cut to group of boys talking – close up on Will before showing other characters} 

Boy friend 1: Alright Jack, you ok?

Jack: *no response*

Friend 2: Jack?

Jack: Oh yeah yeah (slurred)

{Cut to Meg with a group girls – close up on Meg before showing other characters}

Girl friend 1: Do you think you’re gunna take him back?

Emma: I’m not sure, I just wanna to go home to be honest, have you seen Jack? (distressed and drunk)

*Emma goes looking for Jack*

*Girl friend 1*

Girl Friend 1: Jack, are you okay I think Emma wants to go home

Jack: Ur yeah yeah I’ll come in a sec

Emma: Alright we’ll be by the car

*Shot of Jack’s face stumbling through the house*

Extra’s: Jack are you okay?{echoed}

Extra’s: Jack are you okay?{echoed}

CAR CRASH:

Emma: Jack, you ok to drive?

Jack: Yeah fine (slurred)

*sister and brother get in car, brother begins to lose focus and control of the car*

Emma: Jack! What are you doing!?

*Emma is emotional and shouting, holding onto the car as the car veers out of control*

The dialogue then ends when the car hits the tree.